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Comment on burning pain[[part.five]] by Winston

Winston — Fri, 16 May 2008 16:36:30 +0000

Cool story. I really can feel the emotion as the story progresses. I am quite anxious to read the next part. Keep up the awesome work.

Comment on burning pain[[part.five]] by Winston

Winston — Fri, 16 May 2008 16:34:37 +0000

Cool story. I totally feel the emotion as the story progresses. I am anxious to read the next part.

Comment on Burning pain by Annie Park

Annie Park — Tue, 13 May 2008 09:21:27 +0000

I found this page from Space - Wow I really liked your story Your descriptions made it possible for me to visualize the entire happening. Good job!

Comment on Burning pain by Veronica at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

Veronica at EBAFF, Bronx, NY — Tue, 06 May 2008 16:41:32 +0000

This short story was really sad and I liked the first sentence I liked was “I stood there, shock thundering through my shaking body.”it really showed how you really felt.I kind of could connected to what you feel because I been through the same situation when my sister in law passed away and my uncle that was a shock to me because they were someone real special to me and my family.

Comment on Burning pain by john

john — Thu, 01 May 2008 18:54:33 +0000

I read buring pain and i feel your pain and sorrow. I think that you are a strong person. Good job for being brave enough to post your story

Comment on Burning pain by Taylor

Taylor — Thu, 01 May 2008 18:50:30 +0000

WOW! that was a great story. it really had a touching feeling! I really liked the title to it got the message of the story across! IT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment on Hello world! by Mr Comment

Mr Comment — Sat, 25 Aug 2007 21:34:34 +0000

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